Great first draft but a few changes to make: - the main image is good but not striking - find a way to draw it out or draw focus to the knife. - the billing block is too big and the names all need to be on the same lines as the job / credit, e.g., special fx by Tom Clark -the logos at the bottom are good but far too big - shrink them and put them under the billing block. The date could also be a little smaller and under the billing block too - is the colour of the title fitting for the genre? could it be another colour or have an image in it?
Tom,
ReplyDeleteGreat first draft but a few changes to make:
- the main image is good but not striking - find a way to draw it out or draw focus to the knife.
- the billing block is too big and the names all need to be on the same lines as the job / credit, e.g., special fx by Tom Clark
-the logos at the bottom are good but far too big - shrink them and put them under the billing block. The date could also be a little smaller and under the billing block too
- is the colour of the title fitting for the genre? could it be another colour or have an image in it?
EllieB